copy edit the world part 3

Spartan Daily article SJSU men's water polo team prepares for 2010-11 season
November 2, 2010
assion, commitment and team camaraderie have helped the SJSU water polo team fight through past struggles and gain a positive outlook towards the future, said the team’s treasurer.
In the AP Style Book, "towards" doesn't work. It's "toward."

The same year the team also had access to a huge recruiting class, with ten new freshman added to the roster.
"freshman" should read "freshmen"

In 2006 the team held a fundraising campaign and was able to easily pay off all of their league fees, Wagner said.

team is a collective noun, "their" should be "its"

Spartan Daily article: Giants win the World Series
November 1, 2010

The Giants pitching lead the major leagues with a 3.36 ERA (earned runs allowed) during the regular season, according to the MLB website.
"lead" should be past tense "led"

Spartan Daily article: San Jose Sharks beat out New Jersey Devils in Oct. 27 game
October 27, 2010

The Sharks top-line of captain and center Joe Thornton, along with wingers Patrick Marleau and Dany Heatley, took it upon themselves to get carry the Sharks out of their early season funk.
the word carry should be deleted. The sentence makes no sense.